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Baphomet
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Ja sam jednom napisao erotski haiku :D

Zemljotres buja
Venerinim brdašcem
Potoci teku
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Annabel Lee
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Xd!

Sunce sja.
Zeleni listići sunca.
Spavam.
:mrgreen:

xd!xd! haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiikuuuuuuuuuuuu
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Koliko je meni poznato haiku ima određenu formu 5-7-5 ;)
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Baphomet wrote:Koliko je meni poznato haiku ima određenu formu 5-7-5 ;)

Ma dobro, ne cjepidlači, ovo je novi pristup, ovo je još novi, neviđeni,
SLOBODNI HAIKU! XD!
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Baphomet
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Evo još jedan koji sam davno napisao :

Mjesec u ruci
A stopala miluju
Crvi i bube
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Baphomet
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Evo jedan slobodni :mrgreen:

seksa ko u priči
ali šteta što ja
živim u bajki
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U tišini ja,
stojim sam kao hrast,
lijepota je to.

U cvatu proljetnom,
trešnjin cvijet mali,
lijepota istinska.

Ne vidiš sam,
mrak posvuda oko nas
slijepi pred sudbinom


eto malih sad smišlenih
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Baphomet wrote:Evo jedan slobodni :mrgreen:

seksa ko u priči
ali šteta što ja
živim u bajki


bajci ne bajki.Sorry prof deformacija.
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Baphomet wrote:Koliko je meni poznato haiku ima određenu formu 5-7-5 ;)
da pravi japanski ali danas se ide na slobodan stil ali ipak haiku nebi smijeo imati manje od 11 slogova ni više od 22.
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Baphomet
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Učenik wrote:
Baphomet wrote:Evo jedan slobodni :mrgreen:

seksa ko u priči
ali šteta što ja
živim u bajki


bajci ne bajki.Sorry prof deformacija.
Sorry, pjesnička sloboda.
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